[Kileaiya]: 133.ProjectUno

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Kileaiya

Created:

2005-08-13 13:29:35

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Keywords:

unfinished

Song/Album title:

Scourge

Genre:

Other

Finished:

Nearly finished

I'm a living contradiction
a pure work of fiction
I am aching
on the edge of breaking

Chorus:
I'm the scourge of the city streets
rocking out to steady beats
Peering into empty eyes
watching out for corporate spys

As I start talking
you start to walking
Don't need your explanation
just a dead set destination

Chorus:
I'm the scourge of the city streets
rocking out to steady beats
Peering into empty eyes
watching out for corporate spys

On the verge of an upsurge
time for a soul purge

-and this is where I have become stuck, I am having trouble getting the next bit.

2005-08-13 Patricio: Just copy pasting what I already told you.

The lyrics are good, but you have a couple "to"s too many, I think. I'm not sure what is a upsurge :P

2005-08-13 Kileaiya: Hmm *thinks* what could I replace a to with?