[Joakim]: 162.My first song

2007-03-05 Vintage Rhymes and Valentines: Truth be told, that guitar riff is cool as hell but the song features too much repition. It could serious beneifit from a "b" riff or melody that comes in. Try to think outside of the box no matter how limited your skills are on other instruments such as piano, ukulele, bag pipes or accordian they can always give a new air to a piece when introduced.

Second listen:
Sweet drums.