[Citrus]: 93.Blinded

2005-06-17 Gooseberry: this (Like everything that I have tried to play at the moment) seems to work nicely with mangle of D,G and A... though something else might be intended.. when can we hear?

2005-06-17 Citrus: yes, i made a melody for it but i'm new and im not sure how to make a music file. i'm working on it, though, and ill tell you when i've figured it out. do you need a microphone or something to record it?

2005-06-17 Citrus: i guess i can write out the notes but it wouldn't be the same...

2005-06-17 Citrus: here's the notes for the beginning it'll be a little confusing, but...btw "s" means sharp "f" means flat and anything like "C2 or D2" means second C or second d

2005-06-17 Citrus:
I'm so-rry I hurt you
C  F  G A E  D
I'm so-rry I left
C  F  E C D
I'm so-rry I just did-n't un-der-stand
C  F  G A As  A F  C2 A  G
I'm so-rry you left me for-e-ver
G  G  A As  As A F As A
By my-self
A F  G

2005-06-17 Citrus:
But we were blin-ded, blin-ded, blin-ded
F A C2 D2 C2 D C D C
I was blin-ded by the sight of you
A C D C C A A F G
You were blin-ded by the sight of me
A C D C C A A F G
Blin-ded blin-ded could-n't see
A G A G G F G
Blin-ded blin-ded could-n't be
A G A G G F A
My-se-elf
C D C
A-ro-ou-ound yo-ou
C C As A A G

2005-06-17 Citrus: i'll get the rest later...im to lazy now to go sit down with my guitar and figure out the notes (i made up the melody in my head, i had to change the key a little)

2005-06-18 Moorn: My honest opinion of these lyrics is... upper medium. The subject matter is classic, if a little cliche, but the words flow well. The only thing that keeps me from thinking better of this is that the word 'blinded' appears twenty-three times in a verse and a half. That kind of thing can cause a song to get old very quickly. ^_^

2005-06-18 Citrus: Yes. Hence the name "Blinded."

2005-06-18 Moorn: *shrugs* Well, I was just trying to help. Good luck with it.

2005-06-18 Patricio: To gooseberry: Start the song with G! That never seems to fail. At least to me :P
To Citrus: The lyrics are pretty nice. If they go well with the music and the vocal melody, I'm sure the repetition of blinded wouldn't be a problem.
In general: Isn't the symbol for flat #?

2005-06-18 Moorn: Nah, that's a symbol for a sharp. A flat is like a small letter 'b'

2005-06-18 Patricio: Well, it was the other way around. I still don't know which one is sharp and which one is flat. Well, I do now. # is sharp (sostenido, for me) and b is flat (bemol, for me).

2005-06-19 Citrus: [Moorn]: Sorry, I was kind of rude there. The repititions {we were blinded, blinded, blinded}, they sort of fade out, so the first is loud, then the second isn't so loud, and the third is quieter.
[Patricio]: I'm not sure if you were reffering to my song when you said start it with G, but it starts with middle C.

2005-06-19 Patricio: Nop, it was a joke for gooseberry. Most of my songs seem to try to start on G.
The part after "To Citrus" was about your song.

2005-06-19 Citrus: Oh, okay. :P

2005-06-22 Gooseberry: I was talking about the three chord strum anyway! not the actual melody line! thats too hard to describe. *fails to think of any song that he knows that starts with on G*
its either DAG if CAmf in gooseville!
English people should use italian words for flat and sharp anyway what with the other musical notation, were those spanish?

2005-06-23 Patricio: Not even one that starts with G?
DAG is good. Or DAmCG.
Bemol and sostenido? I guess. Or italian.

2005-07-02 Citrus: eh? Ingles, por favor? That's the pitiful bit of Spanish I know...

2005-07-05 Patricio: Bemol and sostenido are the way flats and sharps are called, in italian (and in spanish too). The rest was english :D

2005-07-05 Citrus: Oh, ok.