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[Keyshika]: 136.Not Here
Rating: 0.65 Uploaded by: Created: 2006-05-13 09:12:01Previous:Keywords: not here guitar clean melodicSong/Album title: Not HereLicense:Free for private usageChanged. I removed the drums and my voice, but I'm leaving the lyrics here in case I later on upload them again or something.
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{Me}
I'm not here
I'm not here
I'm not here
Waken up by light
{Ruin-me}
Close the drapes
I don't want light
Oh, leave me
I'm too tired
In need of rest
Understand this
Farewell
{Me}
I'm not here
I'm not here
I'm not here
{Ruin-me}
There's just too much on my mind!
Some happiness all I ask for
... My little torn mind
Can't take it all
I'm not here, I'm not me
I want away
Some peace of mind, nothing more
I'm not me, I'm not me, I'm not me
I'm not myself. I'm not myself!
{Me}
I'm not here now
Don't worry, I just need to sleep
We won't meet for a while, I know
Remember me while I'm gone
Come to me when I seek for return
2006-04-23 exmember6: very emotional riffs.
i love it!
2006-04-23 Keyshika: Thanks! :)
2006-04-25 exmember5: very inspiring voice. so ....melodic and enchantic (specially the whispering parts) *goosebumps*
2006-04-25 Keyshika: Hihi, thanks! :p
2006-05-08 Rolo: :D There alot of great ideas in there, i think sometimes the guitar and the drums don't fit but the guitar of it's own is very haunting and inspiring. It reminds me alot of cradle of a filth (that's a compliment!) definately a great voice!
2006-05-08 Keyshika: Oh my... That's more complimentary than I'd dare to hope to get. xD The drums and guitars certainly do not fit.
Thanks a lot!
2006-05-09 Rolo: :) as one final suggestion, i think you should try re-recording it without the drums and see what sort of sound you get:D
2006-05-09 Keyshika: Could try. Or I could just leave the drums out of this version... but not here, not today. Thanks again. :)
2006-05-09 Rolo: :) you are most welcome
2006-05-12 Vintage Rhymes and Valentines: I'm not sure I really like it. It sounds pretty clippy and the guitar seems too loud sometimes and the whispering is undecipherable unless your looking at the lyrics as you listen.
2006-05-13 Keyshika: Ahah, it's weird that you still like it. :P Yeah, I'm sorry about the clippiness and jumpy volume... the whispering I did mean to be rather impossible to understand unless you have the lyrics.
I will change the file now, though. I can't stand myself anymore. :P The new version has only the guitars.
2006-06-21 ghost: It's sounds cool. Kinda like something you might hear in a Silent Hill OST.
2006-06-21 Keyshika: Wow, thanks. :P OST?
2006-07-09 Vintage Rhymes and Valentines: "OST" is "Official Sound Track" lol
2006-07-09 Keyshika: Ohhh. xD
2007-01-06 Nick: i think if you should put the drums and vocals back in, it sounds a little sad and alone whithout them, it has so much potential
2007-01-06 Keyshika: Well, I think someone should do the drums for me, really... I have no drum set myself and doing it with built-in settings in my pedal sounds wrong on too many levels. What comes to vocals, I need a place to practice singing properly...